"Brutally Effective Copywriter
Brings Your Competitors
To Their Knees...By Turning Ordinary Words Into
Weapons of MASSIVE
Read On To Discover How You Can
Easily Ramp Up Your Sales, Double or Triple Your
Profits -- Using A Covert Copywriting Method -- That You'll
Learn Today -- And Do It
From the desk of: Rasheed Ali
Date:Wednesday, October 24, 2007
New York, NY
The Amazing A.C.E.S. and more...
Dear Friend and Fellow Entrepreneur,
I'd like to share
two secrets to increasing your revenue almost instantly!
If you want to exponentially
increase your sales and profits, boost your subscriptions and
give your competition something to lose sleep over, then all you
really need is
powerful sales copy that turns your visitors or prospects
into happy, paying customers...eagerly waiting in line to give you their
You don't have to admit it but, I'm completely certain you want
...Because you came
to this website to either find a copywriter for your website
and sales material OR you're curious about what you heard I can
do and you're
snooping around on my site. Heheh!
No worries, it's
all fair when you're in business - so allow me to introduce myself
and also give you a word of warning.
WARNING: There is some harsh language on this page
and if my passion for applying direct response copywriting to
your business gets the best of me then vulgarities are
inevitable. In other words..."This is NOT for the
Delicate Flowers among us."
Hi, my name is
Rasheed Ali and I am the direct response copywriter behind
some of the hottest selling products and services on the internet over the
last few years.
I've been called "The
Architect" for my business building abilities and sometimes an "Insidious Beast"
by my clients and peers - for my wicked business insights, masterful
design of sales generating copy and revenue accelerating systems.
prefer the name Combat Copywriter!
Why? Am I some sorta' soldier?
Well, not quite in the normal sense of the word, but I am in fact...
"Soldier of Fortune"
-- In the War for
Because the truth
of the matter is...in business, any business, you're constantly
in a state of war. Just think about it...Does your
competition come around...kiss you on the cheek and give you a
warm, smiling hello?
I think NOT!
More likely they'd ruthlessly cut your business to smithereens or
even worse they would impale you -- leaving your business to suffer an agonizing death if they had the opportunity!
That's reality my friend. If you're in business, you
either kick ass or get
your butt whooped!
about all that
for a second and let me ask you this...
would you feel like if...your merchant bank called you about
your mysterious increased sales activity...while your email lists exploded, your
customer lists began overflowing and your phone was ringing
off-the-hook with new orders?
That's what happens to your
businesses when you 'take the bull by the horns' and apply
direct response copy to your marketing and ads. Your
sales soar, your profits soar and your business takes off like a
Anyone who knows, will tell
you I'm not exaggerating.
Oh, and that's
also not to mention that
the second your competition gets wind of the recent surge in
your sales -- and simultaneous decrease in their sales -- the only words they'll have for you is...
Rotten, Stinkin', Son-of-A-B@#%..."
...And all this happened
because you made good use of a few simple words OR hired
yourself the Combat Copywriter! (you know I had to put that in
Here's the thing...there's really no big secret to this because it happens everyday,
in the blink of an eye and you never even notice it.
It's copywriting of course! Direct response copywriting
to be exact and multi-billion dollar advertising agencies use it
to help their clients generate millions or billions of dollars
in sales every year.
Not only that, but
many of the wealthiest people in the world use direct response
copy to build there businesses and make their competition
obsolete. Heck, Donald
Trump uses direct response copywriters to
maximize his real estate secrets website's conversion and performance.
He even uses them for his sales
material, print ads and radio ads. Just today, I heard
"The Donald" on the radio promoting his real estate
secrets and -- of all things -- he was reading from
a sales script, obviously written by a direct response
"The Donald" is
no fool. Even he has a silent respect for copywriters.
He knows that those with the power of crafting persuasive words
on paper can make
or break his business.
Now I know I promised you some secrets
and I'll give them to you. But keep in mind these are only
two secrets among hundreds that you can learn to improve your
This one will teach you a quick
and easy way to skillfully enter the mind of your prospect so
that they are willingly compelled to listen to and BUY from
The Amazing A.C.E.S. Method Revealed
a time, my business got a bit out of control.
On the one hand, I had
truckloads of money being thrown at me (not a bad
thing) but on the other hand I had additional
demands placed on my time by my consulting clients
wanting my advice on their copy.
I was being pulled in too
As we both know, time is
more valuable than any other element in business.
So to quell the ambivalence
I developed this method over the last few years in
order to best suit the growing needs of my
clients - and give them a
for quickly developing copy (namely headlines) that
The A.C.E.S. Method was
born! Here it is...
headline has these four elements in it almost ALL of
A - Attention
C - Curiosity
E - Excitement
S - Specificity
In other words a
1. Grabs the
attention of your visitor.
2. Builds curiosity about your product or
3. Builds excitement through the use
of powerful ‘news type’ and persuasive words.
4. Is specific to your target market’s needs,
wants and wishes and your product or service.
A long-time client of
mine created a software that slows down video
training material so that the user can learn
specific moves or techniques faster.
Here’s the headline we
came up with in only five minutes and STILL it can
be improved but the sales results have been amazing
to say the least.
“Amazing Software That Manipulates Video So
That Anyone Can Learn At Least 3 Times Faster Than
Normal...Watching The Same Video...In A Completely
Do you see the A.C.E.S.
in there? Great!
Then he continued on
with a video and long-form sales letter.
But remember, this
technique also works for catalogue styled websites
that sell hundreds or thousands of products, yet it
can still be used for other types of products that,
dare I say it…may not require a sales letter!
*** Notice I didn’t
say that they do not require sales copy...just not
a full long-form sales letter.
Writing effective sales
copy or rather writing headlines will remain one of
the most effective and probably STILL overlooked
methods of converting more visitors to paying
customers on the internet.
awesome news for you and very bad news
for your competition!
A.C.E.S. Method Really Work?
you're probably wondering if what I say can really work for
you. After all, it seems too simple right?
Well, I use it
myself, each and every day, to help my clients
generate millions of dollars in sales.
There's no need to
wonder -- Here's what others are happily saying about me...
"Almost Double the Sales From the
Same Amount of
I wanted to send you a BIG
'thank you' for the recent copy rewrite you did for one of our
highly trafficked sales letters. I split tested the copy you
wrote, against the previous copy and the results after a
significant number of actions was pretty astonishing to say the
least. The copy you wrote out-pulled the previous copy by almost
double the sales from the same amount of traffic.
Double the sales =
ALOT more money in my pocket.
I would recommend
your services to anyone. Thanks Rasheed!
SEO Consultant & Internet Marketer
"Quickly Sold A Mansion In Bali Valued at $200,000 By Using Your Copywriting
You are the man. Thanks man for
every thing you taught to me. Even I’ve barrier in my English but it
works for me. When I created my first opt in page it is so awful but
after you critiqued my first opt in and make some cosmetic into it
my conversion rate increase 40% that’s that totally amazing.
Even though I use "Bahasa"
in my opt in, it still works. You are my mentor of
choice! I’ve highly respected to you. Hope some day we can be a
Btw I quickly sold a mansion in Bali valued at $200,000 by using your
copywriting skills and apply it in my writing copy.
My Sales Conversion Another 3%..."
When you told me my copy
was pretty good I was a
bit confused. I thought I could do better. Then when you
showed me how to apply your website mind hacks and I was
like...huhhh? But, on my next promotion you boosted my sales
conversion by another 3% bringing me up to a
total of 7%
on a $997 product! To
think I was willing to pay you up to $25,000 for the job.
Thanks for being an
honest human being and going the extra mile for me!
and your copy rocks too man...
CEO and Founder
"Millionaire Success Secrets Revealed!"
"...Close To 100% Conversion Rate!"
hired Rasheed to write copy for an ad I was running
expecting him to be able to achieve a 12% click
through rate. To my astonishment,
I not only got a click through rate higher than what
I expected, but close to 100% conversion rate.
copywriting expertise is nothing short of magical!
Bill White, "The Synchronicity Expert"
The Biggest Deal, Inc.
Produces Copy Which Is Robust and Proven..."
Rasheed Ali has had a pretty dramatic impact on
my web business. He produces copy which is robust and
I have learned many invaluable lessons as a client of his and always know who to turn to when I need ideas,
inspiration or just some good old fashioned common
Rasheed has a deep understanding of what
works, why it works and how to make it work. Thanks to him I now
run a 'proper' business and not just a website.
Rasheed more power to you!
"Incredible 67% Opt In Rate..."
I followed your advice... made a few quick changes
to my landing page... sent out an ad... got 238 visitors to my
NEW landing page AND...
67% OF THOSE VISITORS OPTED
Wow...An incredible 67% Opt In Rate! I couldn't
believe it, 167 new money-in-fist subscribers from one ad mailing to
a very small list...And even more since then. Previously I'd only been getting one or
two opt-ins from my ads!
Your copy just has to be
the BEST THING since sliced
bread...can't wait to see more.
"Kung Fu" Copywriter
that's just a few of the stories I have.
Fact is, most people
prefer to keep their direct response copywriter a big secret.
After all, why bother to let your competition know who helps you close
sales -- especially at the kind of sales conversion percentages that my
It would be foolish right?
Right...but not completely true. You see, my clients are
confident enough to know that their competition is either not savvy
enough to know the difference or they can't afford to pay my fees.
Listen, anyone who knows
me, knows that I don't come cheap, but you'll be glad to know
that my fees won't rip you a new hole in your pocket either.
A Quick Boost In Sales?
You can use the A.C.E.S.
Method I outlined above and see an instant surge in your sales -- or if
you need to do more than just a quick fix -- you can simply inquire about
using my services on the links you'll find further below.
Come to think of it, I'd like to make something abundantly clear
You see...direct response
copywriting, especially sales letters and ads, is not for the faint-hearted.
You must be prepared for the results. Most people who think they
are ready...are not!
For example here's what happed
to a Mind Doctor who experienced my copy first-hand...
few months ago a website development
team who I had worked with in the past, launched a hefty a pay per
click campaign for their client. The client was a doctor who
had done clinical research and patented an amazing device that
was proven to help people cure certain illnesses by manipulating their
Now after overhauling
the website, launching a proper pay per click campaign and tracking
the sales and traffic statistics, the website was performing at a
loss. They were making one sale per month of a $399 device!
So one afternoon, I got an IM online
and then a follow-up phone call from the web guys. The guys asked me if I could
help them with some copy for the home page to increase stickiness
and get more sales.
"SURE", I said.
"Let me whip something up really quick and let's see what happens"
So I proceed to write
a headline (using the A.C.E.S. Method) a subhead and I inserted a
few focused blurbs in the body copy -- which was obviously written by
the doctor and not by a regular Joe for regular people
(that's a copywriting secret
by the way). I edited the feature bullets
just slightly and I made a few key cosmetic changes.
We're talking an hours
worth of work. The web guys updated the home page with my
changes and left everything the same. The site was getting 100% of
it's traffic from pay per click and as it turns out it was from some of
those second and third tier type of pay per click search engines, not Google Adwords or Yahoo Marketing.
Well, after the first week the website sold 1 unit per day which was
$2,793 in the first week. The next week 10 units.
$3,990! Not surprisingly units kept selling, without
any additional changes, but here's the rub...
The doctor was the
only customer service there was and she was not prepared for the
responses she received. You see, when you sell anything
online, people, including your competition, will send you negative
emails complaining about your sales pitch or something you said on
your website, just to intimidate you.
If you've sold
anything online, then you know what I'm talking about. People
tend to grow "brass balls" when they write an email and become
"pussy cats" when you speak to them over the phone...I know...because I've
wasted my time and picked up the phone and called a few of the "brass-balled" ones just
Guess what? A
few B.S. emails from people who didn't buy a thing, worked on her and she
frantically reverted back to the old website.
Back to ZERO sales, back to
Heaven forbid you get feedback from your visitors, when you couldn't
get a word or a dime from them before!
The only thing I could say was, "W-T-F?!"
How can you go
from $0 to 5 figures or more per month and then purposely go back to
Simple...She was not prepared
for the increased sales and definitely not the responsibilities of
running a business and customer service.
She was not prepared
for the massive response my copy would bring her.
She soon sold the
rights to her device and shut down her website.
So the moral
of the story here is...Prepare yourself and your business for major
Now, instead of devising
some clever sales pitch for you to request a sales letter quote from me, or
pay me for my services, here's what you can do...
You can either...
Here To Request A Sales Letter Quote
Or you can...
Click Here To See Some Writing
The choice is
really yours. You can either use direct response copy in
your sales material and website to
competition and reign supreme or you can do what everyone
else is doing...
Jumping up and
down with their hands in the air, yelling, "Look at me, Look at
ME!" If that's the case then you might as well quit now.
Pack it up, shut down your business, dissolve your corporation
and move somewhere safe from direct response copywriters like
truth is, your
competition is only one sales letter or ad away from blowing you right
out of the water! That's the truth my friend. Anyone
who has been in business for some time has surely experienced
one side of this or another.
Don't worry though...There is a brighter side in all of
You see, making the
decision to change your approach and send your sales
skyrocketing is easy!
But just to reassure you that
direct response copywriting can in fact make a difference in
your normal business. I think this example serves a great
Whether you sell
products online, through catalogs, ads, Ebay, tele-seminars or
in a brick and mortar store...pictures or images have become the
mainstay in your advertising and marketing...Right?
We're taught the
old adage, "A picture is worth a thousand words" -- and it's
mostly true. You can in fact, know a lot by seeing
a picture. But,
what is an ad without words? My
seen thousands of picture ads, I see them all the time.
Walk through Times Square in New York City and you're sure to
see quite a few of them. Yeah, yeah...you can make a
statement with your ad but honestly, if sales are what you're
after...Do you think an artistic and tasteful picture that has
your brand name and makes a "statement" will bring in the cash?
I think not!
Words my friend, words can transcend mere images and tap into
that which makes us human. Our unconscious minds.
Remember, 95% of all cognition is at the subconscious or
rationalize buying decisions based on facts, BUT people
make buying decisions based on feelings.
Words are the the
keys to unlocking the subconscious minds of your target
market...So just how
powerful are words anyway? Simply posting a picture of
your product and listing some features should be enough to swing
your prospects decision in your favor right?
Let's See What 'Little Peanut' Has To Say...
With Words 1
With Words 2
this endangered Baby Asian Elephant.
help save these beautiful elephants with your
Please help Little Peanut because he may be the last of
were ruthlessly murdered by poachers and he
might be next.
sad but...Did you know
Asian Elephants are an endangered species and if
we don't help them, they will be lost forever?
good news is...Your
donation, no matter how small, can help us save
this beautiful animal and others like him.
Little Peanut, help save the Asian Elephants --
Take Action Today!
If you were to
look at that picture alone, what would you see? If you're
like most people, including me, you would see a gorgeous baby elephant
frolicking in the bushes.
But add words to
it and the feelings you have, immediately begin to change. Your
thoughts shift and you are now conscious of another possibility
as you are drawn deeper and deeper into an emotional state --
forcing you to impulsively take action and donate your money.
As the Borg say on
Star Trek..."Resistance is futile!"
You can try, but
you will almost certainly fail to resist it. Your
subconscious mind has already made the choice for you.
THAT is what happens to your visitors and prospects when
you add the power of emotional direct response copywriting to
your advertising and promotions.
Or you can...
Click Here To See Some Writing
The choice is
yours my friend!
To Your Ultimate Success,
Direct Response Copywriter
Business Acceleration Coach
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So click here now!
There's no obligation, your quote is free.
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Once your project is complete, track your results
and I'll work with your copy for the next 90 days to ensure you
get the best results possible!